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Technology in internet.
Technology in internet.
Have you ever used the internet service? Yes or no? If you said no or you don’t recognize
that use internet, it would be not true, because we are easy to use the internet service, such as
public place, café, and in the school anywhere anytime. After invented internet service, the number
of Internet users has increased Tremendously. Accoding to report 105,170,327 active web surfers in
the US and 165,745,689 people in total who have access. Our life-style has been changed. We are easy
to get information and our life-style is more comfortable.
First, before invented the internet shopping service, people who want to buy something
had to go to shopping center, also some people used television-home shopping to buy more
comfortable. But Television home shopping using people just choose limited product-list. They
want free-shopping and unlimited product list. Many companies already knew that customers
want to be easy to buy their products. At that time, internet service invented and then thousand of
internet shopping sites were created by companies. They took advantage of internet. After then
people don’t need to go to shopping center to buy something also they are easy to buy many
products in their room or office.
Second, parents are ever fearful for their children. They want more education for their children.
They are stressed out when their children couldn’t get good grades. And millions of children are
still being denied a proper education, because their parents are too poor to send them to
school. They wanted additional education for their children. After invented internet service, many
education sites are appeared. After then a lot of students are easy to get high quality of
education service at low cost on the internet. There are available education to poor children and
rich children.
Third, after invented internet service, people want new entertainment service. People want more
fun and interesting entertainment. And then many entertainment sites are created, such as
facebook and yahoo and google. On these sites we can enjoy their service also we don’t need to
pay money to enjoy entertainment service. People start to make their personal homepage and
they want to decorate their homepage. Entertainment sites get ready for user icon and
background image for users. Users enjoyed using their free-service. People found new
entertainment.
Finally, before invented internet , people were hard to search information. If someone needed
information, they should go to library or public place. But now they don’t need to go to library,
because we are easy to get information on the internet , such google, yahoo.
But after invented internet, we have had many problems for instance, after appearance internet
shopping mall, people are easy to buy low quality of products, because they can’t check up their
items. And young people don’t want to go to outside to play with their friends, because they
already enjoy to play internet entertainment site. After invented internet, we got both merits and
faults. We have to control that how to use internet service. Merits or Faults
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